This lede works because it concisely provides the right information. From this lede we learn what happened, who it happened to, where it happened, and when. The lede also follows AP style. It also works because it provides enough information to keep the reader interested. The lede makes you want to continue reading. I want to know how the man got there and if he is safe now. I would not change anything about this lede.
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